Wednesday, August 12, 2009

Maze of me. (Poem)

I'm trapped in a maze
Crash landing and broken bones, dazed
I cant breathe with broken ribs
I once found the hole where the Devil lives
Killing people, making pots of evil and changing kids
Somethings gotta give

I never joke when i feel things
Its easy to be unpredictable when mood swings
Lock me in a cage because ill escape
Its seems that nothing will stop my fate

The windows to my soul seem broken
I write and release the joy some call sin
The ones who know not life
I'm new to this world
I had a random visitor and was taken from the scythe
Given back after being mixed and swirled

Tie me down so i don't float away
I'm above the clouds
You cant stop the man i am today
I'm too high not to see below your shrouds

3 comments:

  1. "Its easy to be unpredictable when mood swings" damn. there are so many more in here that left my mind racing "The windows to my soul seem broken I write and release the joy some call sin" It is crazy the way you play on your words baby, I am so inspired. I could go on for days about every line because of the depth .. beautiful

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  2. I like the imagery here. It's strong and paints a descriptive picture.

    "I never joke when I feel things" is my fav line

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  3. I am floored, I came back to read it again."Killing people and making pots of evil." I had to stop there and remind myself to read instead of think about the many things I seen in this line. Its easy to get lost and caught up in your poems when you say things like "I'm new to this world I had a random visitor and was taken from the scythe Given back after being mixed and swirled" .. I cant figure out where you come up with the things you write, but I am grateful that you have been blessed with such a uncontaminated talent [you are just going to keep getting better] love you

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