Tuesday, August 18, 2009

The days. (Poem)

The rays lay slanted upon tectonic plates,
The days for which i feel bad are gone,
The sexual tension is thick for platonic fates.
The plays for which i stole souls of the strong.

The days for struggle lay dead in my back yard,
Looking at the past, ill pass,
I want all of my cake, down to the last shard.
Hard cake is better than no cake mister, no sass.
A drunk giggle right before the bottle of liquor came down with a crash.
Old days are gone and look at me through windows with bars.

Leave me be, I'm good, i promise,
The may-be's never seem to amaze,
But even now i must stay honest.
In my back yard there are failures sectioned in days.
It took forever to get here but now that Ive risen I'm not astonished.

1 comment:

  1. "The plays for which i stole souls of the strong."
    --umm wow-- This is a strong line!

    "Looking at the past, ill pass,"
    I love how that flows...amazing

    I want all of my cake, down to the last shard.
    Hard cake is better than no cake mister, no sass.
    --I like the concept portrayed here... hard caake is better than none...wow

    "Leave me be, I'm good, i promise,"
    another line that flows like heaven

    Ok so overall... I like this. i woudl tell you how it makes me feel but I am just not sure. I know I sense something of a new awakening or understanding..acceptance and readiness to move forward longing for something new.

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