The rays lay slanted upon tectonic plates,
The days for which i feel bad are gone,
The sexual tension is thick for platonic fates.
The plays for which i stole souls of the strong.
The days for struggle lay dead in my back yard,
Looking at the past, ill pass,
I want all of my cake, down to the last shard.
Hard cake is better than no cake mister, no sass.
A drunk giggle right before the bottle of liquor came down with a crash.
Old days are gone and look at me through windows with bars.
Leave me be, I'm good, i promise,
The may-be's never seem to amaze,
But even now i must stay honest.
In my back yard there are failures sectioned in days.
It took forever to get here but now that Ive risen I'm not astonished.
Tuesday, August 18, 2009
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"The plays for which i stole souls of the strong."
ReplyDelete--umm wow-- This is a strong line!
"Looking at the past, ill pass,"
I love how that flows...amazing
I want all of my cake, down to the last shard.
Hard cake is better than no cake mister, no sass.
--I like the concept portrayed here... hard caake is better than none...wow
"Leave me be, I'm good, i promise,"
another line that flows like heaven
Ok so overall... I like this. i woudl tell you how it makes me feel but I am just not sure. I know I sense something of a new awakening or understanding..acceptance and readiness to move forward longing for something new.