The night turns day with crying showers,
Wind damage and floods the next sunrise,
So much power in the night makes it seem like the sun dies.
Every time the earth shows greater powers .
Dangerous, the life we still Haven't seen,
New species still being found or... created,
Water on fire from the sky coming slanted on the scene.
Past history before us that couldn't be dated.
I am, there for i was,
Sin not payed for with blood but love,
Oh almighty from above.
Only you can make me be.
No amount of evolving can make us..this,
The world created from nothing the size of a marble,
Expanding ever so fast but will it ever quit.
And if i was so lucky to get to the edge what would happen..i marvel.
Sights i will never see.
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The night turns day with crying showers,
ReplyDeleteWind damage and floods the next sunrise,
So much power in the night makes it seem like the sun dies.
Every time the earth shows greater powers .
It leaves me a feeling that we as humans arent secure. there is always something more powerful than what we are. It shows how weak we are to things beyond our control
I am, there for i was,
Sin not payed for with blood but love,
Oh almighty from above.
Only you can make me be.
I really liked the fact the you are placing more of your faith in to you poetry, its such a huge part of what drives you.
No amount of evolving can make us..this,
The world created from nothing the size of a marble,
Expanding ever so fast but will it ever quit.
whats so real is that its true we started from something so small but the evolution of life has created beauty we will never get to view with our own eyes. It leaves a longing to take our surroundings in more. you never know what you are missing.
written very well ..
i love you babe. keep it up ..
wow. it really took me almost 2 hours to catch the actual theme of the poem ... uhh
ReplyDeleteand with that said, itll be easier to tell you what i really think
you captured so much darkness in the beginning. it left me feeling so helpless, but i was moved by the pictures you created. knowing that we are so insignificant that there have been others before us that have seen the wrath, but still appreciated the wonder of the beginning. You really do leave me in awe. i often wonder where your mind comes up with images you have never seen, but you explain so well. you make the reader experience every word. love you.
This is some of the deepest subject matter I have seen from you. Talk about powerful and true.
ReplyDeleteYour delivery was so easy to connect with. I feel many of the same things. The way things are changing and the promise of what is soon to come....and the way people just do not see it.
I sincerely enjoy when you write about the world....I will say it again, I LOVE when you write about the world. Your thoughts are so gathered and so on point and more than just opinions...they speak so much truth.
Great work
~I love it love it love it...And I love you!