Im waiting so effortlessly to be dealt a good hand,
While luck is evasive so unluckily,
Ive never had a roll model and calm waters cosign my lifespan.
Tidal waves rise in human eyes when you fuck with me.
Give me a reason to break the commandments that tempt thee,
For sin shall not prosper but exist,
Give me a reason to act mindless, like how i am empty.
Darkened thoughts like the sun when i eclipse.
Im waiting...
While luck is evasive so unluckily,
Ive never had a roll model and calm waters cosign my lifespan.
Tidal waves rise in human eyes when you fuck with me.
Give me a reason to break the commandments that tempt thee,
For sin shall not prosper but exist,
Give me a reason to act mindless, like how i am empty.
Darkened thoughts like the sun when i eclipse.
Im waiting...
so dark. the second stanza is jammed packed with medaphors and i love it. "give me a reason to act mindless, like how i am empty". This one makes me feel like you are boiling with rage and ready to blow.
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