Monday, May 11, 2009

Creativly said. (Poem)

The quicker the sticker, the faster the pinch,
The older the water the thicker the stench.
Turning to triples jiggles the riddle,
Earning the nickel pickles the giggle.
Changing to two's exchanges the dues,
While stirring the stews rearranges the clues.
Certain perplexity cannot be regarded,
Like how the sands slow and the struggles just started.

4 comments:

  1. hmmm .. i see so much more when i read this one, it is "thick" .. the struggles will be worth the trouble as long as its embraced with the idea of future .. brilliant babe

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  2. Brilliant indeed ever thought of having your work published.

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  3. Yea but i doubt anyone would do it.

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  4. im his agent they need to speak to meeeee =]

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